Personal Essays

1. Choose a topic that allows readers to identify, empathize, and be involved.

2. Showing rather than telling

3. Don't make every sentence starting with I, get both detailed and wide point, Don't be too global type topic and try to use details.

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Student of the Month Story

Who - Claire Skrobarczyk What - Won the Student of the month Where - James Bowie High school When - April 5 Why - She was the best example of good student How - She was selected by the teachers On April 5, Claire Skrobarczyk was selected as Bowie Student of the Month. Teachers had a meeting on April 4 to select Student of the Month, and Skrobarczyk was selected because she was the best example of good student this month. Bowie Teacher council decided to end the Student of the Month awarding after this month. As this award is the last Student of the Month award in Bowie, there was high competition between the possible candidates of award. This award is more valuable than previous years. She said the most important thing to be a Student of the Month is attitude in and out of the classroom. Skrobarczyk said, " I was lucky my g rade were high attitude in class was good, also being nice to teachers. " She said she changed a lot from past and gave tips for being ...
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2016 finish

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1. Three Favorite Photos   I chose this photo as my one of favorite photo because the man carry baby middle of ruins looks so desperate and brave.   The color of sky and the ruins matches so well that it seems so desperate and horrible   I don't know how that photographer took that image at that time. It looks really cool because photo shotted exact timing when the person knocked down the bat. 2. Best of 2016 1.   I honestly don't know very much about American musics and artists, but at least I know Beyonce is famous because she appeared in super bowl half time show 2.   In rotten tomatoes the movie Zootopia was the best movie of the year, so I will go with this one because I don't know well about American movies. I think zootopia was good movie I liked the  theme and story. 3.   I think the news of the year is US presidential election because it had a lot of behind stories and scandals. It was also famous becau...
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The drift of affairs in the world Earlier this year Republican candidate Donald Trump was elected as a President of the United States. What Trump pushed as his policies were quite different from other republicans. The policies weren't perfectly matched tendency of right wing. Basically his policies in one word description is "closed." Most of Trump's policies were prioritizing taking care of Americans and making the bar higher for immigrants to come. From eight years of Obama Administration, they deported 2.5 million people, but from two week of Trump Administration, they deported 1 million people. Deporting undocumented people is right thing to do, but just making hard to come to America for being certain race or nationality is not what "American Belief" is. United States is made out of immigrants and built by immigrants. That' why making hard for immigrant to come to America for being certain ethnicity is not what American Belief is. People say...
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